Welp, that is it, I am dead. I am writing this from my warm, trashy grave.
Seriously, though, this was SO GOOD. Mike's fantasy deviating so hard from reality, even though for him it totally is reality. How he imagines the Soldier telling him not to come, being in total control, even though every line makes it clear how not in control the Soldier is. He's so gentle, so concerned about doing the right thing, and all the while Mike's blowing the Soldier and fucking himself on the Soldier and drowning in fantasy land.
Other people have already commented about Mike's last thought, "it's almost human," but I just had to also point out how utterly perfect it is. Even Mike, who is showing his respect, who can't imagine mistreating the Soldier, still doesn't really think of him as fully human. This is exactly what I wanted.
Lastly, as far as the actual fucking goes: That uniform porn? The black armor, the knives and the guns and the way you describe them? That is why I am dead, just fyi. The image of the Soldier leaned back in that chair, covered in armor and weapons, with slight little Mike sat in his lap naked and vulnerable and split open on the Soldier's cock. Yes well. And later, him telling the Soldier to finish even though he was raw and sore and not actually sure he could take it? Let's just say I am a very happy little trash denizen. I wasn't having the best day today, but I think I will go to bed quite cheerful tonight anyway.
I've no idea what you've got planned for part three, but I have been pretty happy so far. :)
Re: FILL: All You Fascists (Bound to Lose) [2b/3]
Welp, that is it, I am dead. I am writing this from my warm, trashy grave.
Seriously, though, this was SO GOOD. Mike's fantasy deviating so hard from reality, even though for him it totally is reality. How he imagines the Soldier telling him not to come, being in total control, even though every line makes it clear how not in control the Soldier is. He's so gentle, so concerned about doing the right thing, and all the while Mike's blowing the Soldier and fucking himself on the Soldier and drowning in fantasy land.
Other people have already commented about Mike's last thought, "it's almost human," but I just had to also point out how utterly perfect it is. Even Mike, who is showing his respect, who can't imagine mistreating the Soldier, still doesn't really think of him as fully human. This is exactly what I wanted.
Lastly, as far as the actual fucking goes: That uniform porn? The black armor, the knives and the guns and the way you describe them? That is why I am dead, just fyi. The image of the Soldier leaned back in that chair, covered in armor and weapons, with slight little Mike sat in his lap naked and vulnerable and split open on the Soldier's cock. Yes well. And later, him telling the Soldier to finish even though he was raw and sore and not actually sure he could take it? Let's just say I am a very happy little trash denizen. I wasn't having the best day today, but I think I will go to bed quite cheerful tonight anyway.
I've no idea what you've got planned for part three, but I have been pretty happy so far. :)