I love your writing, it's so funny and wonderfully descriptive at times.
"Their jubilation was dampened by the discovery that Steve's smaller self might no longer be Captain America-sized but was still 100% Steve Rogers, and Steve Rogers was now mad enough to spit nails. A minor oversight in the design of the containment area meant that smaller-Steve had simply wriggled out of the now ridiculously-oversized restraints like an angry ferret escaping a paper bag, and punched the nearest technician in the nuts."
This is just pure gold, I squeed, and you have more wonderful expressions like that. " I also loved the actual sex scene, and how they're just sort of having a moment there, and the guards are completely oblivious to it.
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I love your writing, it's so funny and wonderfully descriptive at times.
"Their jubilation was dampened by the discovery that Steve's smaller self might no longer be Captain America-sized but was still 100% Steve Rogers, and Steve Rogers was now mad enough to spit nails. A minor oversight in the design of the containment area meant that smaller-Steve had simply wriggled out of the now ridiculously-oversized restraints like an angry ferret escaping a paper bag, and punched the nearest technician in the nuts."
This is just pure gold, I squeed, and you have more wonderful expressions like that.
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I also loved the actual sex scene, and how they're just sort of having a moment there, and the guards are completely oblivious to it.