This is fucking spectacular, anon - the dynamics here are so gorgeously, painfully twisted. "[H]e thinks you’re punishing him and he’s trying to figure out what he’s done wrong. He doesn’t understand you’re just fucked in the head." Christ! And the horror of that isn't even the point, it's entirely incidental to the relationship at the heart of this deliciously monstrous little piece. NGL I would read 100,000 words of this. I want to see what it looks like when Jack "insists" on including the knife in their sex life. I want to know exactly what "Jack doesn’t take refusal lightly" means. Love your take on the characters, and how much you manage to convey in so few words!