Loving it. The tension, the arousal, the fear, despite reminders that it's just a game - even to the point of using a safeword! And he called yellow! I don't think I've EVER read someone call yellow in fic before...it's always just green or red. Refreshing! I also loved how you brought in the early detail of the spilled water to become a plot point. Gotta fire that gun if you hang it up!