Someone wrote in [community profile] hydratrashmeme 2018-01-12 02:11 pm (UTC)

Re: [Fill] Teamwork (2/3)

Ok, so I'm not great at commenting, but I wanted to express how much I loved this.

First, the dirty talk is GREAT and I do love Steve was actually really into it even though it's role reversal, and how Bucky just KNOWS how to push his buttons.

I love that you did show that Steve struggles with his role but can contain it. I love how their day in the park, they basically did a switcheroo, where Bucky was all light and bubbly, but it was hard for Steve.

But, most of all, I love how Bucky can read Steve and how - without even needing to go into safewords - Bucky cut that of, because they both knew it was not good timing for that dynamic.

So yes, this was well worth the wait.

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