Someone wrote in [community profile] hydratrashmeme 2017-05-28 03:25 am (UTC)

Re: Fill: Wrong (10/10)

You brought it right back around to the beginning beautifully, here.

I loved the line He can avenge. because that's what Steve does, and what he becomes, even though it'll be seventy-odd years before he formally gets the title of Avenger.

Steve crashing the plane into the ice was sad, but you showed how Steve was at peace with his decision. It was also a tiny bit hopeful, because Steve is thinking he's going to see Bucky again. We all know that he will, but not in the way Steve expects.

This has been an amazing read, from start to finish. Thank you so much for putting in the time and effort to write it.

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